After receiving feedback from my minor project hand in, I have revisited my pre-vis and edited the opening sequence. In this version the chicken sees the brand new dolls house on display and imagines life inside the home. This prompts his journey up the shelves.
Hi Megan - you're going to need an establishing shot of the toyshop - even if it's a painting - because right now it's not clear to the audience where this is happening - it becomes clear obviously - but it does feel as if a piece of the narrative jigsaw is missing.
Hi Megan - you're going to need an establishing shot of the toyshop - even if it's a painting - because right now it's not clear to the audience where this is happening - it becomes clear obviously - but it does feel as if a piece of the narrative jigsaw is missing.
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