Having discussed the possibility of making alterations to my original script, I returned to the story and began exploring some changes that could be made. Whereas the story was created using the three things; an egg, a contortionist and a joke shop, I now have the opportunity to move away from those restrictions.
Original Script:
Script Changes:
Rather than the animation beginning with the rubber chicken being taken out of it's nest, and the journey becoming the return to the nest, he could start in a 'bargain bin'. The focus of the chicken's journey is to get a spot on the central display where all the new and popular toys are shelved. This would take place in a toy shop, rather than a joke shop as I feel this gives more opportunity for toys/characters to come alive.
Act One - The toy shop is full of children laughing and playing with toys, especially those on a large display in the centre of the shop. A rubber chicken watches from a bin in the corner, wishing someone would pick him up and play with him. The shop closes and the children go home, leaving a mess of toys on the floor.
Act Two - The rubber chicken climbs out of the bin and makes his way through the mess of toys. (Possible obstacles: jack-in-the-box, fun snaps, lego, dominoes, scalextric/train set, jacks, play doh)
Act Three - a) The chicken climbs onto the shelf just in time for the shop to open.
b) The chicken fails to climb onto the shelf. However, a child enters the shop, finds him on the floor, picks him up and takes him home.
In terms of style and era, I was thinking around the 1950s and I want the toys included in the animation to create a sense of nostalgia. The shop itself would appear older and dated but the display shelf that the chicken is aiming for would show toys released in the 50s, such as scalextric (released in the late 50s), play doh (first launched as a toy in 1956, however existed as a wallpaper cleaner since the 30s) and etch-a-sketch (available in the late 1950s).
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